Cyber Garage Project

I'm still taking baby steps. Add a little more here, edit a little bit there...
Added a moving hold on the fox after he drops to ground. Don's response to the scene was...

"Two things come to mind immediately: The momma rabbits entrance is too mushy/slow. It lacks energy. Additionally, the moment the rabbit sees mamma fox and halts in her attempt to hit the fox, it does not have enough surprise in the action. It neets a good "Take." You need a special drawing to register the surprise on her (Momma Rabbit) face."

On the rabbit's entrance I had two drawings (4 frames) for the "squash" when she hits the ground and grabs the fox. The first one wasn't "squashy" enough and I felt her weight was still too far back so, i added another more exaggerated "squash" with a weight shift. I thought it worked better that way but, i see his point. I've removed the first drawing and it seems to hold up (though I may have to redo the entrance altogether).

I also noticed the fox's tail should continue to spin after she kicks him and catches him. I'm going to work on the tail and the "take."

that almost sounds Dickensian.